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your poetry is horrible

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i am irrepressible teenage angst.
here is my bitchy poem.
whine.
moan.
woe is me.
(insert typo here)
i can use
drastic S P A C I N G
to make my point
(insert computer shorthand here)
my girlfriend just dumped me.
whine.
perhaps i can
write at length about
s u i c i d e
(insert trite phrase about loneliness)
because i am ohsotouchy

sob.

so, to all you
heartbroken
struggling
adolescents out there

shut
the
fuck
up

your poetry is horrible.

pain does not always equal great art.

now, go write something worth while.
why dont you go post some more stock photos of yourself taken from your web cam, while you're at it?
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