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your poetry is horrible by !gustoboy:icongustoboy:





i am irrepressible teenage angst.
here is my bitchy poem.
whine.
moan.
woe is me.
(insert typo here)
i can use
drastic S P A C I N G
to make my point
(insert computer shorthand here)
my girlfriend just dumped me.
whine.
perhaps i can
write at length about
s u i c i d e
(insert trite phrase about loneliness)
because i am ohsotouchy

sob.

so, to all you
heartbroken
struggling
adolescents out there

shut
the
fuck
up

your poetry is horrible.

pain does not always equal great art.

now, go write something worth while.
©2002-2009 !gustoboy
:icongustoboy:

Author's Comments

why dont you go post some more stock photos of yourself taken from your web cam, while you're at it?

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:iconlawwn-g:
erm. ok. i like you poem. sad... odd.. but nice.

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I turn down the volume and think about fucking Christina Applegate.

Chut Up.
:icontr1cky:
BAHAHAHAHA!

oh i love this. the picture is great too.
this will be the first poem added to my faves.
:iconstarryangelicus:
gosh... um. you okay?
:iconantisocialumpa:
that is a horrible thing to write. i personally am a poet. and although all my work isnt the best i think alot of it is good. not all but most people write to get things off their mind. i know i do. and if you have a problem with that then you really need to quite reading poetry. i hope that by writing what you did that people aren't discouraged to write poetry. you are a jerk!

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no more. no more sorrow. no. not until tomorrow.
:icongustoboy:
1. if someone wants to write in order to vent and get things off their minds, fine. do that. i do that. however, if it has little or no artistic quality, i keep it in my journal. where it belongs

2. ever stop to think that i am getting things off my mind by writing this?

yeah. so eat me.

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:licking:
-_-_-_-Go for Gusto-_-_-_-
:icontelek:
I dunno about you, but that really made me laugh (especially the pic)
:iconchaosboy:
Haha, fuck yeah. Good laugh and at times I agree with you.

This is so original in its delivery. Fuckin love it. :) (Smile)

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So Charlize Theron? Two thumbs in....I mean up! Two thumbs up!
:iconpisschrist:
I WOULD LIKE TO THANK JESUSBITE FOR SENDING ME THIS LINK

it was great
i know i write about emotional shit 99% of the time.
but i like to think it has meaning.

anyhow, you added me to you watch a few days back, and now i return the favor.
:iconmonkeystyle:
I know exactly what you mean.
Nice work, your choice in images was great too. And the description was gold.

--
"It's impossible to do something cool without outraging someone. In fact, I usually judge how cool I'm being by how many angry people are following me with signs." -seanbaby

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