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she decided not to by !gustoboy:icongustoboy:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Sociopolitical > Open




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Sometimes, I just pray
<s>for another attack.
Bombs, planes, boxcutters.
I don\'t care how.
I just pray
for something
horrible.
I do it because
I really just want
everyone to hold hands,
and to be able to cry
together.
That\'s not a bad thing.
It\'s really not.
</s>

(she wasn\'t sure
why she decided not to.)

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©2003-2009 !gustoboy
:icongustoboy:

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~kingvitamin Jan 19, 2003, 9:33:09 PM
Well fuck. The poem I wrote in my head and never put down. +fav.

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~bluvirgo Jan 19, 2003, 9:34:48 PM
Why do I like this....the screen shot and the poem just fits so damn well. It reminds me of indecisive I am. And submitting something with words crossed out. that's an artist statement. Also crossing things out is saying "she thought of these things, but doesn't want to admit it."

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:iconfukcface:
~fukcface Jan 19, 2003, 10:48:28 PM
Sometimes nobody gives a fuck until tragedy happens.

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!alcoholic Jan 19, 2003, 11:13:08 PM
This eager intellegence is why I watch your every move.

I loved it.
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~doomit Jan 20, 2003, 3:34:24 AM
The move to strike a line through the ways in which one reads the poem
is great.

Over my head

-doomit

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I AM NOT IN CONTROL!

-Doomit
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~otter1 Jan 20, 2003, 3:46:50 AM
i once thought it would be an amazing idea to create a jenga set where you play with two sets, painted like american flags, and when they fell it would be like the towers falling... Am i crazy to think this idea wouldn't work in ten years?
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~justaphase Jan 20, 2003, 12:55:51 PM
ahhh, the crossed out lines are ingenious. almost as ingenious as the message. ive been doing a bit of that sort of wondering, since its MLKJr day... how human is only ever admirable when miserable.

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All I know is that I know nothing.
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~freeyourmind Jan 20, 2003, 3:01:29 PM
i really like this. it has a strong message. good job.

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rachel :hump::petting:
RoCk On :headbang:
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